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Post  ××Eris×× on Thu Jun 11, 2009 6:56 am

(a note on the writing. her 'sparrow' is her heart and kind of like 'butteflies' and stuff. okay? she doesnt really have a sparrow in her chest)



i gallop in, my hooves beating against the turf with dull thuds that reverberate against the ground. they sound like drums, my war drums. my tawny coat shimmers with a thin layer of sweat. my mane and tail stream out behind me like shining white banners in the wind. my legs carry me swiftly to the crest of a small grassy hill nestled between a lake and a meadow. i stop atop it and raise myself upon my back legs. my front hooves thrash and strike powerfully out at the air as i rear. screaming, i claim the land around me. my mane billows out behind me magnificently and gleams like it was made out of microscopic crystals. i land lightly upon the soft earth, barely making a sound.

my heart flutters, just like a sparrow. i prance in place, unable to stop moving because of the rush of adrenaline and because my little sparrow is flitting around inside of me. my auburn eyes flash and gleam in the pure sunlight that catches them. my nostrils flare, catching the musky scent of other animals, the moist, comforting smell of earth, and the pungent perfume of flowers. i swivel my ears, searching for any other sounds. but all that is heard is merely nature. unchanging.

the sparrow in my chest finally settles and allows me to stand still. suddenly, the wind changes and carries to me the fragrance of Equines. a snort erupts from me that is dangerously close to a growl. i turn in the direction of the scent and raise myself up into my back legs once more. i bellow much louder than last time and my front legs whip out with such speed and force that there are snapping sounds in the air. i land heavily and space my legs apart, planting myself in one spot and making me almost impossible to move. i wait without patience for the equines that lead this land to come forth........

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Post  Gold Horse on Sat Jun 13, 2009 4:26 am

I canter in silently appearing out of no where from the mist,with fire in my eyes.I stop and rear striking out with my hooves and then came crashing down "What do you want!"

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Post  ××Eris×× on Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:18 am

i glance at the other equine with dangerously hooded eyes. instead of making a ruccus and yelling, i went with a different approach. i turned to the horse and sneered "this land" i flicked my silky tail and held my head high.

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Post  Gold Horse on Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:35 am

*I glare at her and rear baring my teeth* "No,I will not give up my land!"

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Post  ××Eris×× on Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:42 am

i stay calm "then you will fight me for it and you will die." i charged at (him or her?) and knocked (him/her) over, making (him/her) roll down the small hill. i could see as i raced after him that his front leg was broken. i didnt give him time to stand back up. instead, i reared forward and kicked his stomach. blood spurted everywhere

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Post  Gold Horse on Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:51 am

(him)
I stand and rear slashing her face with my hooves staining the grass with blood,I land then rear again striking her in the chest and sink my teeth into her neck.

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Post  ××Eris×× on Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:56 am

i rear and scream wordlessly. i shove him back and kick him in the head repeatedly, i could hear when his skull cracked. i then turned quickly and kicked him savagely in the chest, knocking him on his back. i raised myself up on my back legs and came crashing down on his ribs, four of them broke. i could tell because two were sticking out of the skin, their whiteness in contrast with the blood pourong out and thw other two werent even in the ribcage area, they were jutting out from his back. he was losing a massive amount of blood

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Post  Gold Horse on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:01 am

I get up and kick her rump making him trip into a redwood tree.I whinny and rear.I bite her ear and pull his head back, making him fall to the ground.I kick his head against the tree

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Post  ××Eris×× on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:10 am

(its a girl lol)

i get back up and run at him. i rear anddig my sparp hooves into his face, blinding one eye. i then sink my teeth deeply into his windpipe right below his head. i clamp my teeth down and i feel them come together. i the jerk my head back repeatedly. i finally rip out his windpipe i stip out the flesh and blood that fills my mouth. he can no longer breathe and he will die soon. i raise myself onto my back legs and shove him over onto the rocky ground. the sharp rocks bite and gouge into his skin, blood covers the ground

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Post  Gold Horse on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:12 am

(you can't just kill him)

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Post  ShallyAllyOooo (Admin) on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:13 am

Um, Eris, you know that I can make you some land, but if you're doing this for action, by all means, carry on Very Happy, please don't actually kill him though.

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Post  ××Eris×× on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:30 am

(i didnt kill him. i am just stating that without oxygen he would die soon. i never said he was dead, i just observed. and yea. im doing it for action. lol. can you believe it is summer? the weather sucks)

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Post  ShallyAllyOooo (Admin) on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:33 am

(I know, I can't believe its summer because of the weather. Its frustrating because its supposed to be summer! waaaaaaaa.)

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Post  Gold Horse on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:34 am

(well I don't want my horse to die)

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Post  ××Eris×× on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:35 am

(well then your horse can surrender. and mirasol can be the lead of these lands)

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Post  Gold Horse on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:38 am

(I want to keep the land,so if you do get the land you have to rename it and change the discription and pics)

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Post  ShallyAllyOooo (Admin) on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:39 am

(Okay, so, whose leading the land!?)

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Post  Gold Horse on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:40 am

(Its still my land)

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Post  ShallyAllyOooo (Admin) on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:43 am

(Okay, Eris, do you want some land?)

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Post  ××Eris×× on Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:44 am

(i fought for this land. he lost. i am confused. shouldnt mirasol get it?)

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Post  ××Eris×× on Mon Jun 15, 2009 8:14 am

uuuuhhhhhhh........ still pretty confused!!

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Post  ××Eris×× on Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:36 pm

i do very much adore getting answers for my questions. it makes me smile

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Post  ShallyAllyOooo (Admin) on Fri Jun 19, 2009 6:39 am

(I don't know who gets it, i guess we'll just have to wait till gold horse comes back)

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Post  Gold Horse on Fri Jun 19, 2009 6:42 am

(I'm back)

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Post  ××Eris×× on Fri Jun 19, 2009 7:01 am

well, what in the world?! mirasol wanted the land. Mirasol challenged for the land. mirasol won the challenge for the land. mirasol should be the new leader of the land. i dont see how the loser would win when the loser lost and didnt win...... because they lost confused

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